Black Poetry : Tears of my Love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I give you the chocolate moon
    my harvest starz at night
    the sunny sun in day to feed
    you light i give you my dreams
    to sleep on and a part of me
    so your heart can roam I offer
    my love as your home

    I'm here for you just simply ask
    but somehow you feel it's a task
    i gave my soul and great treasures
    but you walk on it wit dread pleasure
    my tears of love , i weep for you
    my love is steadfast & very true blue
    i've given life's beauty for free
    all i asked that you give your heart to me

    Even we maybe afar but did you know
    i ware your heart and wit you today
    just like yesterday and will be tomorrow
    but this must stop leaving me in sorrow
    my eyez on the sparrow above
    see i walk beside you along the way
    but your actions say !
    No Thank you not today
    you break notions wit mean motions
    running from this true devotion
    as i fill the bucket wit tears
    and striped all the cares
    i fear not you abandon face
    because i know by faith of grace
    soon someone will take your place
    i so confess my belove through my tears.

    :crying:
     
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    I think many will be able to relate to this sorrow filled piece. True love can't just be replaced by another just like that. It takes time to truly be able to move on. Emotive piece.
     
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    sometime a replacement is what a heart need to move on
    Thankz watz
     
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    I have heard that said, don't know if it's true or not. Flow on then.
     
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    it's true it's what many feel as a healer again thankz
     
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    within the healing have began...to look for another to replace some pain never turns out to be true but if that is what it takes to heal....baby this was mad heartfelt i know this pain thank you for bring this out...Peace Angel
     
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    yes indeed angel just sometime this the was to go
    thankz for the love & visit sista Queen i'm honored.
     
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