Black Poetry : Tears Of Destruction

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  1. Ms. Acqua Di

    Ms. Acqua Di Member MEMBER

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    This is my first time posting, I hope you like.


    To my demise through your eyes
    You seek to tear me down
    Why should I be surprise…

    The tears that run down my face
    Only to stir up another chase
    How can I beat this same old tired a@@ rat race.

    You think you got all the answers…

    Huh, ha ha… my brother
    You, but only you
    have begun find out what really matters
    with all that stupid chit chatter.

    See the blood may flow and the tears may come and go
    But your destruction you don’t even know.

    You don’t seem how much you meant to me,
    but today… huh, you’ll see I’ll be okay.

    So, my by brother no more shall you tear up the road that really matters,
    you only will find that another top hat can and will flatter!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & love
    welcome from da man in flyte above
    ya flow is sweet nice to feel ya scribe in vibe
    continue to flow sistah:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow... i likes a lot...
     
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    WeLcOmE

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    WELCOME :)
    LOVELY TO HAVE YA' :)

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    This was a GREAT first scribe :)
    cant wait to read more :)
     
  5. Ms. Acqua Di

    Ms. Acqua Di Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    I would like to thank everyone for your support and words of encouragement. :love: :kiss: :grouphug:
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful............ and this is your first time posting? This was so nice......... keep them coming........
     
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    welcome Ms.Acqua, i hope u like your stay here,
    much love
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  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welcome to Destee's :)

    I enjoyed the flow and
    I look forward to reading
    more of your work.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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