Black Poetry : tears for you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, Jun 9, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart cries tears... for you
    every time I hear a love song
    see your car (even though I live in another state now)
    imagine you here

    When I hear your voice
    and you are not there
    When I am painting the house
    and wanting you near
    imaging us painting each other

    When I reach out
    to touch you
    in the middle of the night
    only to have the cold air
    give me a fright

    When the dog I got
    for us gives me a look.
    When I come home from
    work only to hear my footsteps
    echoing in the hall

    When I go shopping for
    furniture imaging you looking
    at me like I am crazy
    or us laughing at something
    silly

    It is sad to say.. and sad to bear
    that I must tell you... that I will go on
    but everyday I think of you
    my heart
    still cries tears for you.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a beautiful piece...i'm lovin' the emotion...
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :( Ohhh Rico :( you personify the pain so well...may you heal...tru love is at ya door :) just be patient :)
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u painted a masterpiece this was beautifully posed
    let ur ink continue
     
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    This is a very strong peace it took every thing I had not to cry.
     
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    I'm weak..I ain't like shant...i did almost cry had to hold it in though......write about the pain so well...my heart goes out to you :sad:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it's well felt deep within
    hold on !!!
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Foolish, foolish girl to give up someone so SPECIAL!

    Keep on flowin boo, it only gets better!:grouphug:
     
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    Rico..........your words just tug at my heart.

    Another heartfelt piece!
     
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    Hey Rico...this is wonderful..your flow do touch the heart
    Peace
     
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