Quiet Poetry Lounge : Teardrops Wild Ride [Needs A Title]

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  1. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit softly cooing my coffee
    As dawn duals darkness
    Courting culled memories
    Promises imprisoned by me
    By negativity and neglect

    I sit saturated by sayings
    Sapped like old coffee grounds
    Sucked dry of natural goodness
    Simmered one to many times
    Now supplying only colored water

    That though weak wills wonder
    About why so many teardrops
    Were added over and over again
    If it was just wanton or wasteful
    Error of wanting/wayward wish

    If first brew/each fresh brew
    Was for scent or out of need
    Making full pots be cooked
    But not cared for, savored
    Just a thing to be caressed

    Its heated kiss casting
    Warmth into coiled places
    Life inside hard ,cold temple
    Tomorrows into trapped day
    Each swallow used to curb
    TEARDROPS WILD RIDE
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay UL820 :wave:

    me again ... :)

    I enjoyed this much, sitting here in the wee hours of the morning, fantasizing about a nice hot, black cup of coffee and opportunities missed and teardrops wild ride ... :) ... Thanks For This Moment.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was delightful da warm tears roll on dis ride
    ((da tyme is now))
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The title is cool, ur I mean hot. Anyway this is a very interesting read, one to read over and over.
     
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