Black Poetry : Teardrops Shared...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His tears flowed through
    my tear ducts, and I
    wish I could hold him
    and I
    wish I could fold him
    and I
    wish
    that I could mold him
    with the warmness of my touch
    as a sculptor molds the beauty
    of the art that they feel so much
    I wish
    that I could
    accomplish
    this
    so that you can now know
    even more so
    Since your tears
    are my tears as well
    We were one at that moment
    Can't you tell?
    We held each other's spirit
    as each teardrop fell...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    teardrop ! the rain fall !!!!!!!
    embracement of soul as spirits
    weep they find each other arms

    i like this drop sista watz
     
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    When spirits weep, it often brings them even closer. Glad you liked this piece brotha Rich.
     
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    tru dat emotions twist together and bring
    a togetherness in warmth .....................
     
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    Yes Rich, a warmth that binds spirits together, as one body....
     
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    Very Nice Watz

    This is a warm flow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you felt the warmth therein Hodee, appreciated.
     
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    let me just say this we cried, cried , cried we cried together. yes watzinaname i had to break out with the O'Jays. much love for ya.
     
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    i like this reminds me of the O'jays song....

    thanks for sharing nice flow


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember that O'Jays cut, haven't heard it in a while though. Thank you both for responding nevar and blkangel.
     
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