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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Nov 26, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is this the end?
    Seeing that your purpose was fulfilled,
    Once again,
    The very gift that draws me,
    Like a magnetic force,
    And then, I realize that I can’t have you,
    Of course…what was I thinking?
    But what if I just acted dense,
    As if common sense,
    Wasn't common to me,
    So that you would come to my rescue?
    Just so that we could spend time, innocently,
    Imparting into each other’s lives,
    You with knowledge, and me with whatever I can.
    You with the satisfaction that floods my heart,
    Every time I hear you utter my name,
    Ask me if I’m okay, and if I understood,
    Like only a real teacher would.
    But now that I do,
    I will have to go on once more,
    Living without you.
    So show me again.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow... :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yo pen speaks so freely love da vibe u bring keep flowin
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it's meant to be, it will be. Very nice, delicate flow.
     
  5. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad u be diggin my flow,
    but so u know,
    it's just the beginnin...

    Thanks
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo I hear ya girl. what is it about human nature that you have to learn a lesson at least twice (usually more) for it to really hit. this flow is on hit.
     
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    so very nice
    as i flow with the vibe
    of this deep piece
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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