Quiet Poetry Lounge : teach me how to cry....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', Oct 30, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    teach me how to let it out...
    teach me how to cry my pain away...
    teach me how to let myself accept that it is okay to cry...
    how teach me how to embrace tears as my way to healing and
    recovery...
    teach me how love myself enough to want to get better...
    teach me to allow the tears to wash the pain to into a distant memory..
    allow me...somebody to cry..please teach me to cry...

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lo' come here sweetie allow me to
    teach u da motion of feeling
    as tears flow
    allow me to show u da math of
    tears + pain = love N' gain x healing
    2 a 100% joy
    let me teach u da heart felt mend
    of misunderstanding pride
    let me teach u ...................
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, I will take any lesson right now-must admit my math isn't all that great...but I will try and put the sum into use...thank u...

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to start 1 pain X 2 tears - da emotions =3 +9
    wit feelings of light da day shell come
    mixed ova 11 - 10 drips = 1 luv

    LET NOT THE HEART TROUBLE FORTH DA TEARS OF PAIN IS
    A GAIN OF PEACE WITHIN FORTH CRY AND FEEL THE DEPTH
    OF YA SOUL AS IT MEND INTO HAPPINESS...........(OUTLOOK)

    BRIGHTER THEN EVER 4 DIS NEW FOUND LOVE....
     
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    I used to be hard, not wanting to be vulnerable, not wanting to shed any tears for anybody. And then my heart couldn't hold my hurts inside any longer. The tears began to fall and I cried all night. It was the most wonderful feeling of relief the morning after.

    I will never again hold in all that pain anymore. Just knowing how sweet the release is, will start my tears to flowing.

    Just thought I'd share. Thank you for sharing this piece. It is ok to cry.

    Shade
     
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    indeed what comes out the body is away a good feeling !
    said forth our GOD whom set it to be ......
     
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    wow....I like this~!
     
  8. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice

    i like your poem it was very different. i see your location is in south Africa, i am from Nigeria/Ghana. how are you?
     
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