Black Poetry : Tasting the fruit

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tasting the Fruit

    Catch the vibe of
    The melodic vibrations
    Let it romance you
    Let it hypnotize
    Your erotic thoughts
    And as the vibration
    Tenderizes your imagination

    I want to come forth
    And give you all of me
    Yet I am at frenzy
    And a loss for words
    And as images of you
    Enter my mind
    A thought occurred
    And I wondered
    Can this really be true?

    The way she caressed my thoughts
    The way her spirit touched mine
    The feeling I receive
    When she is near me
    Send me into high
    That no other drug
    Can even compare too

    Hell, not even the heaven
    Can explain this feeling
    My mind is like a
    Solar eclipse when she
    Stands in front of me
    All I think of
    Is erotic thoughts

    Hell, I wanna taste her lips
    Letting them caress my thoughts
    With sensual feelings
    And as they tease my tongue
    My manhood starts to stand
    And wants nothing more then
    To experience her glory on top of me

    I want to taste her fruits
    And eat that peach
    Like it’s never been eatin before
    I want to tenderize it
    With licks of passion
    Seduce it with kisses
    That will leave her mind
    With only one thought

    And as she comes to that
    Point of climax
    I want her to
    Grab the back of my head
    And shove my face
    Into her womanhood

    So that I can taste
    All of the juices that
    Her peach is letting erupt
    Savoring every last drop
    Until it has been consumed
    Into my digestive track

    Just so that I can say
    That I have tasted
    The sweetest nectar
    That any man has ever
    Can I have the blessings
    Of just kissing those precious lips

    I want to get lost
    Within your womanhood
    With my thoughts
    So that I can
    Inject my throbbing pulse
    Into your glory and please it like
    There is no tomorrow

    I want to give you
    Injections of affections
    That will have you thinking
    That God himself
    Came down from the heavens
    Only to bless your womb personally

    I want to give your glory
    Every bit of
    My pulsing heart
    And with the rhythm
    Of my heart beat
    Give you all
    That will ever satisfy
    Your wildest dream

    And when it’s all done and over
    We can start over, and over, and over again
    Let me please you mentally
    Touching you physically
    By placing my mind
    Inside of your thoughts
    And yet I wonder
    Can you handle all that?

    But the truth of this philosophy is
    Not even if you can handle it
    Nor if you embraced it
    But if you can do me
    The same way I just did you
    Can you stroke my mind
    Cuddle up with my rhyme
    And give me blessings
    That only a woman of high quality
    Can stimulatingly give?
    I wonder
    Can you?​
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heck naw my bratha, that was hott, i mean ova 190 degreez, boi u on fire tryin to give anotha sista yo desire, yo i was feelin dat all ova..lol...naw let me stop, but flo on....and on wit yo rhymes of fire
    and i wonda can anybody give u dat?..lol


    blackluv and bp
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: I need a cool drink of water. It is too much. Defiant I think I am Open :slobber: I digress
    Nice piece please flow on I am eagerly waiting for another drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was red hot .....love the fruitful bliss
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ladies and gentalman..... I am glad you enjoyed this piece.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey mister you been tasting too many fruits but i like it . do your thang honey.:smooch:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm... interesting... wondering if you want me to taste.... well never mind lol thanks for the responce..
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tasting fruits without caution is a no-no but i sure would love for you to give me some mental. dont get me wrong luv how you put it down my papi.:smooch:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma not every one gets that plesure trust I am very selective in my pickings.
     
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    Forget a cool drink of water.
    A cold shower.
     
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