Black Poetry : Tasting the fruit

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tasting the Fruit

    Catch the vibe of
    The melodic vibrations
    Let it romance you
    Let it hypnotize
    Your erotic thoughts
    And as the vibration
    Tenderizes your imagination

    I want to come forth
    And give you all of me
    Yet I am at frenzy
    And a loss for words
    And as images of you
    Enter my mind
    A thought occurred
    And I wondered
    Can this really be true?

    The way she caressed my thoughts
    The way her spirit touched mine
    The feeling I receive
    When she is near me
    Send me into high
    That no other drug
    Can even compare too

    Hell, not even the heaven
    Can explain this feeling
    My mind is like a
    Solar eclipse when she
    Stands in front of me
    All I think of
    Is erotic thoughts

    Hell, I wanna taste her lips
    Letting them caress my thoughts
    With sensual feelings
    And as they tease my tongue
    My manhood starts to stand
    And wants nothing more then
    To experience her glory on top of me

    I want to taste her fruits
    And eat that peach
    Like it’s never been eatin before
    I want to tenderize it
    With licks of passion
    Seduce it with kisses
    That will leave her mind
    With only one thought

    And as she comes to that
    Point of climax
    I want her to
    Grab the back of my head
    And shove my face
    Into her womanhood

    So that I can taste
    All of the juices that
    Her peach is letting erupt
    Savoring every last drop
    Until it has been consumed
    Into my digestive track

    Just so that I can say
    That I have tasted
    The sweetest nectar
    That any man has ever
    Had the pleasure of
    Can I have the blessings
    Of just kissing those precious lips

    I want to get lost
    Within your womanhood
    With my thoughts
    So that I can
    Inject my throbbing pulse
    Into your glory and please it like
    There is no tomorrow

    I want to give you
    Injections of affections
    That will have you thinking
    That God himself
    Came down from the heavens
    Only to bless your womb personally

    I want to give your glory
    Every bit of
    My pulsing heart
    And with the rhythm
    Of my heart beat
    Give you all
    That will ever satisfy
    Your wildest dream

    And when it’s all done and over
    We can start over, and over, and over again
    Let me please you mentally
    Touching you physically
    By placing my mind
    Inside of your thoughts
    And yet I wonder
    Can you handle all that?

    But the truth of this philosophy is
    Not even if you can handle it
    Nor if you embraced it
    But if you can do me
    The same way I just did you
    Can you stroke my mind
    Cuddle up with my rhyme
    And give me blessings
    That only a woman of high quality
    Can stimulatingly give.​
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to defiantson...........

    yeah i let you taste the fruit
    let you lap up all my juice
    wont be fat-free
    or that big word reduce

    be 100% natural
    home grown baby not factory

    sweet but just right
    if your good i may let you taste it all night

    let the juices run forth from your mouth
    i hope you'll learn to like the dirty south

    got the flava that makes your heart melt
    cause blemishes upon the skin causes welt

    been known to break out with sweet tooth comsumption
    you probably cant believe how i got the gumption

    to put it to ya this way
    having you play out our scenes of how our body sway
    i give you some sensual play

    give you something that will make you fall to the knees
    i know your mission for tonite is to please

    the inner, and outter me
    lets go wild on this erotic fantasy spree

    hope you love the taste of sweet peach
    gots something make you snap back and reach

    beyond the horizen
    cause your nature to rising

    to meet its tasty juicy fruit:kiss1: :kiss1:
     
  3. spicybrown

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    Taste This Fruit....

    Honeysuckle, dew covered, melon-berry bliss,

    dig your fingers deep inside, juice it, drink the pulp not one drop can you miss,

    I'm that fruit salad, fresh, healthy, and tossed just right,

    reminds me of that wet fantasy I read over and over last night,

    Honey-Dew-Melon quench your thirst in the heat?,

    after sucking the juice, you ain't seen nothin' yet, orally grind the meat,

    Scrawberry bliss,

    topped with a sensual kiss,

    the chocolate heated to 200 degrees,

    dip it in, get down on your knees,

    to pant and moan for another bowl of this fruitbowl dream,

    oops, I forgot to ask, do you like your strawberries with whipped cream?
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D - This is a succulent poetic piece that makes you hungry for more.
    Delectably scribed. Well done. HH
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Grade A flow i really enjoyed this piece
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, I like the answers that came to this poem. And thanks for just reading it.
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah defiantson we appreciate you liking our answers but on my behalf can you hang my brotha. if you can than spit back at us. oh boy you know i got it look back at it, look back at it.!!!!!!!!!1:blowkiss:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I hang, is not an issue, the issue is can we bless each other, go to a point where both of us can get wetter. I am not speaking of physical sex, right now I settle for mental sex.

    Defiantson
    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High.
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
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    yes that what i'm talking about this mental sex some Mental Foreplay
    giving your mind a puzzle that wont be fix
    so say Defiantson you want to mix!!!!!!!!!1
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats whats up anytime.
     
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