Black Poetry : Tasting the fruit

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tasting the Fruit

    Catch the vibe of
    The melodic vibrations
    Let it romance you
    Let it hypnotize
    Your erotic thoughts
    And as the vibration
    Tenderizes your imagination

    I want to come forth
    And give you all of me
    Yet I am at frenzy
    And a loss for words
    And as images of you
    Enter my mind
    A thought occurred
    And I wondered
    Can this really be true?

    The way she caressed my thoughts
    The way her spirit touched mine
    The feeling I receive
    When she is near me
    Send me into high
    That no other drug
    Can even compare too

    Hell, not even the heaven
    Can explain this feeling
    My mind is like a
    Solar eclipse when she
    Stands in front of me
    All I think of
    Is erotic thoughts

    Hell, I wanna taste her lips
    Letting them caress my thoughts
    With sensual feelings
    And as they tease my tongue
    My manhood starts to stand
    And wants nothing more then
    To experience her glory on top of me

    I want to taste her fruits
    And eat that peach
    Like it’s never been eatin before
    I want to tenderize it
    With licks of passion
    Seduce it with kisses
    That will leave her mind
    With only one thought

    And as she comes to that
    Point of climax
    I want her to
    Grab the back of my head
    And shove my face
    Into her womanhood

    So that I can taste
    All of the juices that
    Her peach is letting erupt
    Savoring every last drop
    Until it has been consumed
    Into my digestive track

    Just so that I can say
    That I have tasted
    The sweetest nectar
    That any man has ever tasted
    Can I have the blessings
    Of just kissing those precious lips

    I want to get lost
    Within your womanhood
    With my thoughts
    So that I can
    Inject my throbbing pulse
    Into your glory and please it like
    There is no tomorrow

    I want to give you
    Injections of affections
    That will have you thinking
    That God himself
    Came down from the heavens
    Only to bless your womb personally

    I want to give your glory
    Every bit of
    My pulsing heart
    And with the rhythm
    Of my heart beat
    Give you all
    That will ever satisfy
    Your wildest dream

    And when it’s all done and over
    We can start over, and over, and over again
    Let me please you mentally
    Touching you physically
    By placing my mind
    Inside of your thoughts
    And yet I wonder
    Can you handle all that?

    But the truth of this philosophy is
    Not even if you can handle it
    Nor if you embraced it
    But if you can do me
    The same way I just did you
    Can you stroke my mind
    Cuddle up with my rhyme
    And give me blessings
    That only a woman of high quality
    Can stimulatingly give
    I wonder can you bless me with your thoughts
    As I blessed yours?
    .
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do remember those passionate words! I'm glad u found a title and gifted us with this one again. Nice ending too!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Wisdom you know your one of my favorites on here.
     
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    this leaked like butter how i felt dis one deeply
     
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    If she can satisfy your mind and your body the same as you have satisfied hers, then the two of you have found paradise. This was sultry from top to bottom poet.
     
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    Thanks all
     
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    The feeling is mutual!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appriciate that. Looking forward for your next script.
     
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    this was beautifull Poet


    aww ...


    there is one piece in youre poem ...
    in wich i believe that if that would happen to any woman perticualy...
    and man would be the higest form of making love...

    that is amazing beautifull....
    and i believe everyones dream.....



    at least that is a dream of me...


    and i had one...









    but that was a dream....







    tough it seemed real...








    keep writting Poet..
    and touching..


    us....






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww that was cute. Thanks
     
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