Black Poetry : taste of chocolate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Apr 26, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaaahhh...it was such a blunder
    to stop and chat with that
    chocolate boy wonder...
    that
    sleepy-eyed bandit
    whose face was distorted
    by a cloud of smoke-
    with his speech slow and slurred
    as he spoke
    disrespectful and neglectful
    comments
    that furrowed my brow
    and sharpened my glare...
    but he didn't care.
    He stood there openly leering
    staring into my cleavage
    as if it were my eyes-
    watching it while I moved
    as if he was hypnotized...
    smiling and biting his lip
    when he would shyly glance at my face
    with hell's fire mischiviously
    dancing in his gleaming orbs,
    looking like he just wanted to absorb
    or penetrate
    the invisible gate I had erected
    and inbibe the sour ***** serum
    I had self injected,
    because with every ignorant, snippish verse I'd spit,
    he'd smile, nod, and just take another hit.
    I hated it...
    hated him...
    for being so callous and nonchalant-
    for disreguarding my quips
    and mentally licking my breast and hips-
    for....
    for standing too close
    and intoxicating me with his smoke,
    for looking pleased with the anger in me
    he provoked,
    for...fascinating the hell out of me...
    for making me feel free...
    because while standing there sniping at him
    I was actually able to be myself...
    and I hated him for it....
    for making me want more of it...
    that feeling of freedom and quiet security-
    hated him so much that I fell in love
    and never been able to crawl from under
    the hunger he incited-
    the cravings for that **** chocolate boy wonder.
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  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hook it up SGS...

    This was tyght - sista gurl!
    Lovin' this prose...mos' def!!
     
  3. hypersleep

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    heh

    :)

    you write so well you cause a spell,
    i'm drawn in you
    like a portrait

    :)

    still lovin' the way you
    shake me
    down
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SGS....

    yesssss.... indeed!!

    when i was finished reading this the 1st thought
    that entered my mind was "bravo!"... followed by
    a standing "O". i lovedid it! felt it!

    Peace&Blessings...
    SunShyne~
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chocolate Boy Wonder? Hi, I'm blakman! :rolling:
    I'm tripping queen this piece was nice. He was mentally doing what? Hold on let me scroll down and check.I'll be back.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Yeah, mentally licking your breasts and hips........****....he's a bad mutha~~~~ shut yo' mouth!

    keep flowin' sis.

    one love,blak
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww u guyz!!!

    yall makin me blush with the praise yall give...

    ive been ghost lately, but always here reading...
    but you guys always have fat poems and there be soooooo many that i like....my posts become redundant and i end up sounding stupid lol

    but i deeply respect yalls work and am honored by all who stop by and reply to my meager words....

    thank you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MY MY U GO HEAD AND FLOW
    AS I STAND IN AMAZEMENT..
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i got one word, sgs...incredible. i'm in awe of yo talent, but you already know that, dear poetess.
     
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