Quiet Poetry Lounge : tap

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 27, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I... feel so far from u right about now.
    its like we're farther apart the more the days draw on
    im really missin ya sweet flava on my lips and the gental touch of ya finger tips
    on my hips
    as i sit here listenin to the rain tap tap
    a tap tap
    tappin on my window
    i... seem to wish it was u right about now
    u remeber back in the day when u would tap tap on my window pain and as me if u could come in
    i've got ya back thru thick and thin no matta wat
    and i know u gots mine also but sometimes
    i wish i could just jump on the next flight back to cali to see u.
    as i sit here listenin to the rain tap tap
    a tap tap
    tappin on my window... i wish it was u
    like back in the day when we were true blue and u'd say is ya mom awake and id reply naw she aint even home
    i love the way u are and hope u dont change while im so far
    i hope u only change for the better
    and i wish i could write u a letter everyday
    or send u my i love u's in a box and send it thru the rain that taps at my window
    the way u say i love u makes my skin quiver but i havent herd it in a while
    i still feel so far from u
    y when its just the distance we have between us
    the air so thin
    but as i sit here the rain tap taps tap taps on my window
    i wish i could just talk to u whenever i want
    to tell u how much i love u
    and express it to u in every way
    i wish that when i talk to u i could just ask u to come over
    and u'd say ill be there in 5 mins.
    it hurts me to say that those things cant happen right now
    the rain outside falls so hard but the rain in my heart falls even harder
    i wish i could wake up to u in my arms while the rain tap taps tap taps at our window
    i wish i could fall asleep with u besides me while the rain tap taps tap taps in my heart
    the taps of my soul hit my pillows every night b4 i fall asleep...
    my heart my window the rain tap taps and i miss u


    __________________________________________
    this is for my love
    Gen~Ethic Soul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe i know the missing of one when
    miles between become air space and the heart weep
    i've been there myself and moon my way into the night
    without holding that someone close to me ......
    in time u will be together keep ya head up high
     
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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty

    thats comforting to hear yet sounds like such a fairytale right now

    thanks for the look out

    Geneticsoul
     
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    indeed most welcome
     
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    Rain conjures up a lot of thoughts, like the comparison of the rain to tapping on the windowpane...liked this flow.
     
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    much love

    thanks guys