Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tannika's Rise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, Apr 18, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    You are the new morning.
    Let the world take notice.

    Emerge from the shadows
    Of the darkest night.
    Only to walk into the rays
    Of a beautiful sun....

    Become the miracle
    That flowers greet.
    Re-arrange a cloud
    for a friend....

    Rise from the mist of yesterday
    And shine the light of today.
    Let your dawn radiate outward.
    Leave traces soft as morning dew..

    Tannika, you are the new morning.
    The world will take notice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another wonderful scribe by da handz ......awesome piece poet !
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    thank you rich....always nice to receive your support. it's very encouraging. this piece is for my neice, who struggles with confidence at times...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perfect inspiration to rise to, any morning. Does wonders for us too, poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree...
    You are not only our new morning now ...but all our "Future" mornings to come.
    Nice piece poet!
     
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