Black Short Stories : Tall Dark and Handsome

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  1. purplelistic

    purplelistic Member MEMBER

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    Tall Dark and Handsome

    Tall Dark and Handsome this man of essence stood.
    With a physique to die for
    Standing 6 foot 5 tall. Shoot, this man was and is
    lookin oh so good, oh so fly and so in dept from the
    top of his head down to his big toe.
    Brown carmel skin, luscious pinkish lips, trimmed
    mustache and bald round head.
    Not only was this fine man a SNAP but he was the
    CRACKLE and the POP
    I say who is this tall dark handsome man?
    Matching from head to toe in a nice brown suite.
    Everything in tack, nothing out of place
    Could clothes make this man look so good to me?
    Nahhhhhh! I say because he spoke.
    He spoke very intelligently like he had CLASS.
    Not like your usual dumb ***.
    Then I ask could CLASS make this man look so fine to
    me?
    Nahhhhhh! I say because when he walked into the room
    he already had my attention.
    Could it be all physical?
    Nahhhhhh! because you know that comes first and I know
    that I have matured from that physical stuff.
    Well what could it be? I say what could it be?
    So what was this? Usually I just look and then turn
    my head. But this time my attention stayed fixed on
    him. This tall dark handsome man. I didn’t even want
    to turn away.
    **** there it goes again the attraction.
    Hold up, Hold up! Old flesh stand back.
    You don’t rule me!
    Self did you discuss this with the MAN up above.
    You know he will never lead you wrong.
    Could this be this man’s rib I have.
    My mind says get to know this man.
    This tall dark handsome creation that GOD has made.
    So I ask, Lord could this be the man of my dreams,
    the one you said just ask and it shall be given.
    You know the one that I pray to YOU day in and day out
    for?
    Remember I said that he must be he got to be SAVED,
    filled with the HOLY GHOST, smart, intelligent man of
    GOD and loves me like YOU love the church.
    REMEMBER...............................
    I’m waiting for confirmation ...... for I am not move
    by what I see that’s why I gotta stand until my change
    comes.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis story was da SNAP! CRACKLE & POP!!
    keep'em droppin'
     
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    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you girl, The Lord WILL answer your prayers,

    great story
     
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    HELlo!!! i hear on this one! much props on the last part. that's how u beat back them demons! and i reaaaallly agree w/ ShayShay that GOD really WILL answer your prayers......cause he answered mine!!! :)
     
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    yes indeed da feelin dis story pose
    is greatly wow!!!!
     
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