Black Poetry : Talking to Her

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  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I noticed her sitting on the edges
    Of my peripheral vision and with
    Ever so slight precession I glanced
    And she glanced and our eyes
    Become one and at that moment
    I understood that she was in need
    Of something or someone
    Maybe a healing hand
    maybe an Ear to confide in
    or perhaps this women was
    in need of A man
    Today I finally conjured up some confidence
    to talk to her and as I Walked down the
    presumably perpetual Halls of her mind
    I questioned her About her life and
    who she was and Then quickly it was over
    “hello”
    “how are you”
    “fine”
    “goodbye”
    There it was.
    Maybe I’ll get the nerve to say more
    tomorrow
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP.


    soooo... you finally decided to say hello!!?
    good for you! hey... keep me posted... :D

    did i tell you that i'm diggin' your flow??
    (check your pm's... one mo' gin')...

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Really

    Dug this because I can relate! lol

    Tight Scribe Poet!
    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gotta say i feel ya'.

    tyte flow.

    jh
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lonely one

    Lovin the picture painted here...well done poet !

    peace
    g-man
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP,

    I'm taken by how you capture realism in your pieces...

    Clever concepts mos' def!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the replys everyone
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LPoet,

    Nice! Keep doin your thing. Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats all i know how to do coco
     
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