Black Poetry : Talk to You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 28, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, there
    Person beyond the screen
    With a secret identity
    You're doing a good job
    Fooling me

    Most often times
    I wonder who you are

    And as I read your rap~poetry
    I'm more drawn to you

    Hey, there
    Person beyond the computer

    You fill me with temporary emotion
    And control me

    And I listen to you
    More than some people do

    More than some people reply
    Because they're really feeling you

    For some reason
    I can believe that
    You've walked in my shoes

    You are so real
    That it dosn't even seem fair

    That I'm here and you're there

    Now as I'm reading you
    It becomes clear

    That I can also
    Use my senses
    To determine
    Your
    Character

    And I want to talk to you
    But not sure
    If you would want to talk to me

    Yes,not really sure
    You would except me
    This way

    So I'll talk to you
    Through my words,
    And I admire you from afar

    But you know
    You make me wonder

    You make me dream
    This fairytale
    And it's so fun to

    Imagine
    Your reaction
    To my amazement
    For the time being
    And curiosity that plagues
    My egotistical mind

    Sometimes
    I'm delighted
    To see it coming
    That keeps my whole thougths humming

    Running wild and ramped
    Endlessly

    And if I could ask you one question
    What would it be

    You're amazing
    Yet it seems so strange

    It's almost imaginery
    Because you don't know me
    And I don't know you
    Of coarse

    So how could
    I be
    So involved
    How could I be so
    Enfatuated
    For your love

    And in an enthusiastic
    Kind of way

    How did
    I let you slip
    Into my being

    It's food for thought
    That keeps me coming for more
    And I won't stop
    Till I get enough

    I keep on pursuing
    And momentarily
    Rehearsing
    What I would say to you

    If this keeps happening

    Soul Searching
    And finding I had
    Feelings so deep
    That I could swim in
    It's going to leak

    And subconsciously
    And unconsciously
    Not even knowing I'm doing it

    Look who's provin it
    I shouldn't get over whelmed

    But it's great to know
    There's a person like you
    In the world
    Who's rich in his heart.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Finished.
    Desert Storm
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyyght...

    loved the flow of it...the reality of it all...how you jumped into the minds of everyone on the PLAYGROUND and made them sit for a while.

    lovedit
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Luv U 2, Babe!

    And marrily we go along!
    Thanks 4 reaching out!
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    u done took my mind in big thoughts of
    whom be on da other side of my screen!:heart:
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww Shi...

    This was clever ma! Gotta give you madd love fa dis'

    Diggin ya flow
    Reas
     
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