Quiet Poetry Lounge : Talent Show of words

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Many lines been written
    as the show of words been spoken
    rearrange in faze of frames
    that enlight a flame can't be tame

    Dancin on the stage
    by voices of human rage
    words are un-cage
    in depth of many wayz

    The show goes on from thoughts
    what's seen , heard and felt
    that poet's are delt
    that will pose a talent to melt

    Some go free style by da miles
    other use da free verse dat hurst
    ya body in cold chills of thrill
    that ya mind can feel at there will

    Then you have act 2 of da show
    when other hit and flow
    in a vibe they had scribe
    mic checkin in Villanelle style
    or droppin it in Sestina even a sonnet
    and windmill you wit a quick Haiku

    Da voices heard in the talent sho
    where lines leap from page and blo
    that moves waves as they glo
    do i need to say mo poetic:censored
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know Rich, when I read this, I envisioned various Destee poets, droppin wonderful lines on the mic. Brought a smile to my face poet, I enjoyed this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah so many wayz to mic check and vent be heard and felt through da
    words dat was written now in voice spoken ....Thankz watz
     
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    Thinking and i had to bring this one back up as i see so many with words
     
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    sticking this back in view
     
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    $$RICH$$,

    Thanks for sharing your AMAZING talent.
     
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    thankz bruh .
     
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