Black Poetry : Taking That Walk

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Today i take that walk
    the walk to the front
    i stand again before
    another shell
    where life once was
    again i have to be me
    standing strong
    passing faith around
    i have to carry the load

    even as i tear up
    to drop a small river
    i have to stand in front
    placing under da earth
    as spirit remains
    da soul head to glory
    in silent prayer i pray
    i cast my humble beings
    ova da darkness to
    bring forth light
    not of my saying
    but by GOD's

    what seem to fade away
    will be forever inside
    a heart of broken mask
    a painful journey

    here i go again
    but this tyme i won't be alone
    i carry by my side faith, hope, love
    millions of prayers
    taking da walk again so soon
    the heart of broken life
    leave me in a maze
    yet reality continues
    in a war for my loveth
    i so giveth unto he as
    he done unto me
    so i walk leaving a mark
    again u know i've stood their.
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling this piece, bro
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you got that right!

    we got your back Richy Rich :)

    "here i go again
    but this tyme i won't be alone
    i carry by my side faith, hope, love
    millions of prayers" :grouphug:

    keep writing

    one

    poeticd

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks Amberly & PD
    the walk i made dis day was peaceful a celebration
    of life unto the master of Almighty

    i heard the key and i saw when the gates swing open
    i knew she made it HOME
     
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    MOVING

    $$RICH$$, this touching piece personifies your innate talent as demonstrated by your CALLING (Hello...)

    1poetsought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed thankz 1poet
     
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    in his arms
    i feel his embrace
    i knoweth of his love
    i feel him healing
    i'm still
    just want to smile again !

    Thanks sista cindy the comfort is welcome

    luv ya .
     
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