Black Poetry : Taking over Destiny.........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destiny,

    I failed you once again
    I cant depend

    On that so call man in my life
    Its not like Im not going to become your wife

    So many times you left me standing in the rain
    And its like you dont care if the pain

    Starts to settle deep with in me
    Dont care if you ever have set me free

    I had a plan and stuck with it
    You came along saw my goals and erase it with a stick

    When I wasnt looking
    All the while pushing

    Me over the ledge
    Didnt want me to get ahead

    But let me tell ya boy I cant go on this way
    Cant stand to stand alone one more day

    Because you could never appreciate the fine things I've given you
    World, I take a bow its me the clown the fool

    Fool for you
    I know what I have to do

    Its finally let you go because Destiny is calling
    Wont stop, wont be falling

    On face
    She's shown me grace
    And your going to get your own taste

    Of your medicine
    I must put on discipline

    Hard
    Discard

    ya cause i dont need ya
    dont want to see ya
    dont want to feel ya
    dont want to hold ya

    Because Im ready and willing to take over my own

    Destiny

    and then maybe then

    Destiny will be Fulfilled............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    One whom handle it's own fate
    surely controls it's destiny and
    never get raddled by what one set forth
    fulfilling is da key i like how u pose'd this piece .....
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, well, Ms. Nevar, you spoke from the heart again, and once again I am enlightened:spinstar:

    Beautiful scribe sista
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very moving nevar

    i wish i could be as confident about my own
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, my heart goes out to you.... but this was a tight drop...

    Mannie
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartfelt drop sistah nevar:blowkiss:
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou rich for showing me love always

    thanks spicy so icy for giving me some love

    howardtsu thanks love for entering my world

    thanks papi for giving me love always

    soulful2006 thanks for the visit

    and to cursed heart thanks for the love sis
     
  9. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    i love this nevar....it's like stepping up to define yourself....i always like your couplets, they are so well put together...

    a great work...keep scriptin...and ima keep listenin
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I got love for you Nevar, so f-u-c-k ya man he ain't me. lol just wanted to make you laugh....
     
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