Black Poetry : Taking Me There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Nov 26, 2005.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Taking me there​

    Where foreplay was words that played
    And deep dips
    Were mind flips
    Sweet sips
    Into the morning bliss
    From the pleasure cup
    That runs over with joy

    Can I tell you more?

    Going back into a moment in time
    When my mind shy from the stimulation
    Of the natural behavior that stirred the adrenalin
    Into combustible fixations
    Craving a spurt of ... something

    Facing the sunrise and the sunset
    Not feeling fatigued
    Just pleased
    To love freely
    Give willingly
    Just because
    It felt right

    I've grown

    I had thought I was recovering from a
    hypnotic state
    But
    This was false
    I was never spellbound
    Or hypnotized

    Just awakened

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i too
    thought it was done
    but learn the yearn
    for some mo
    where it takes me into
    submission of bliss
    and the feel eroticness
    twist as the kiss is laid
    as words play extremely
    to entewined wit passion
    i knew then it was a wake up
    so here i am ready to take u
    there anywhere wit care
    and cascade the beauty ova ya
    u wanna go!
     
  3. spicybrown

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    Go Girl, tease these menses........love the format of it. Just make like the suffix of yo name, and flow on shawty:hi:
     
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    He didn't put you under a trance, just awakened you to the sensual possibilities. Blue, this expression was exquisite!!!
     
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    Going back in that moment
    You are a wonderful poet
    Thank you bluewater
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI Rich :wave:
    Yes I wanna go
    where words cascade over
    the falls of my thoughts
    and drift into a heated adventure
    of deep dips, swirling hips
    short breathe,
    warm caress
    flirting with my
    mental :)

    lol..wow..thank you :)
    for the flow and love :heart:

    hi sista spicybrown :wave:
    That is really so kind of you sis..thnak you so much for the love

    hi sista watzin :wave:
    Yeah sister that is what happen..awaken ..ah so nice..thnak you dear sister for the love

    hi Tantrum :wave: thank you so much for the love poet..you are a great poet as well

    Thank you all for your love and your thought on my drop:heart:
     
  7. Khasm13

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    this was a great piece sis...
    and i especially liked the end...word!

    one love
    khasm
     
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