Black Poetry : Taking Me Home

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, May 7, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We spent the day together. We met in the park.
    We walked around the city, laughed, talked, played, touched.
    When it started getting dark, we started to your home.
    "You wanna see my house?"
    "Yeah," I answered.
    We go to your house, nobody's home. My stomach starts hurting.
    I'm nervous because I know what I want you to do to me.
    "This is nice. I like it." I say.
    "Really? Thanks. I like it too..." You continue talking.
    Only, I can't hear a word you say.
    My stomach does flip-flops and my head feels light.
    You walk towards me and pull me to your body.
    I float to you and we embrace.
    You kiss me. you kiss me. you kiss me.
    You kiss me more.
    You lay me down on your bed, yet I still float.
    You take my shoes off. You take my socks off.
    "Are you comfortable?"
    "Yes." I whisper.
    You lay down beside me and ask me to look at you.
    I look at you.
    I kiss you. i kiss you. i kiss you.
    I kiss you more.
    I pull you up and peel your clothes down to the floor.
    And then we explore.
    And then you taste me and I, you.
    And then you complete the union we must make.
    You make me scream. and i scream. and i scream.
    And you make me scream more.
    We spend the night together.
    We meet in the dark.
    You explored my city, we laughed, talked, played, touched.
    When it got wet, you took me all the way home.
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please forward all my calls to the shower
    that is where i will be for a while
    Daaaum
    U very baaaaad
    slap yourself
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks y'all

    i'm glad y'all enjoyed this. it was pulled out the archives.
    -7
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmmmm sistah!!

    this was hot...I mean red hot! I don't think I blinked once through the entire piece!!!lol
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol! had the same effect on me!!
    -7
     
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