Quiet Poetry Lounge : TAKING "ME" BACK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diamond823, Mar 23, 2007.

  1. diamond823

    diamond823 Member MEMBER

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    You seem to hurt me on purpose and I don't understand your reasoning for this!
    But I am not the type of woman to jap the $#@% out and throw a hissy fit
    See in the past that might be something I would do
    Now after a long look into myself I decided to try something new
    I know I am a beautiful woman and I don't need you to reinforce that anymore
    what I need is for you to to turn around and walk back out that door and when you depart you can take the sleepless nights,the endless tears,
    and the "what's so wrong with me's",that I have uttered constantly through these years
    See now I know there is nothing wrong with me, it's you!!
    You and the games, indescretions and lies
    There is no more room for that in my mind, heart or life
    there is no more space for the "maybe he will stop one days"
    Today is the day that I take my heart back, clean out the bull and get it back on track
    See I loved you so deep and completely
    I had no room and forgot to love ME
    I am my my rock, my backbone, my salvation
    and all my self worth is not for debating
    my heart and my mind have battled for so long
    and my soul felt that it was'nt strong
    bu tyou have helped me win that battle
    thank you for being and staying you
    and teaching me next time what NOT to do
    never again will I put myself in this situation
    and putting up with garbage just for the sake of a "relationship just being"
    I am a good woman and I deserve a good man
    so i'll just sit back and wait and put it all in GOD'S hands
    don't get me wrong at all I will love you forever and more
    but the best thing for us is for you to walk back out that door
    no bad feelings or hate exchanged
    just the wisdom, and knowing no more tears, no more unnecessary pain
    and the knowledge of knowing
    one day soon I WILL be whole again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u will .........i feel you here
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No, the love for another does not just disappear, even when we are treated just plain wrong. But we have to love ourselves enough to say, enough! Such an emotive piece, so very well posed.
     
  4. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been there sista girl, so i know you said it right,
    tell dude "he's tyme is up" and make sure he flick the light,
    on his way out the door, that bull @#$! you want NO more,
    No more tears, pain, hurt on the bathroom floor.
    No more days at work, thinkin' how you gone make it thru?
    No more crying in your car, on lunch hour, about what to do,
    Cuz see I'm thru wit YOU!
    You done cut me up! Verbally, spit fire in my face cuz you'z a nasty
    crude @SS dude!
    So your excused......
    Jus Get the @#$ out my face!
    I dont want you apologies,
    nor your heartless embrace,
    I dont want you promises, presents, presence, boy Im thru~
    yeA, I played ya game, but i can no longer play ya fool......
     
  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well after reading this I'd say you where whole from the start of this. You just needed to vanquish that negativity that was clouding the way back your true self. Indeed it always feels good to find and love who we are again. Glad you found the way back to you sista & nice write.
     
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