Black Poetry : Taking a Page Out of His Book

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destined to be one
    of the greatest stories I have ever read
    It's the story of you
    revealing the thoughts in your head
    Taking just a page out of this book
    and examining every word
    Marveling at how you can spot a pinhole of light,
    within the abyss of darkness that has occurred
    It's that perpetual silver lining that you rarely
    seem to overlook or misplace
    Choosing to forgive the countless knives in
    your back, focusing rather on the rare embrace
    Salivating like one of Pavlov's dogs, I
    anticipate every new line
    Savoring each sumptuous sentence, drinking
    every drop of your essence's wine
    Thoughts, more precious than diamonds, emanating
    pearls of wisdom oh so wise
    If I could bathe in the treasures of these gems, I would,
    soaking in the luster of the words before my eyes
    If just a slice of your life, brings tears
    to my eyes such that I can barely look
    How can I possibly succeed in taking in the total
    personification scribed within this book?
    Destined to be one
    of the greatest stories I have ever read
    It's the story of you
    revealing the thoughts in your head
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sweet.

    Appreciating ones words, effecting thought & emotions.

    Really diggin' this.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know you're diggin this piece Positive, much appreciated poetic brotha, thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    outstanding fill with great essence
    mental thoughts and the motion within
    tyte poetic drop sista watz.........wow!!
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got to give it up... this is the real shiz'nit!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!!!! I love this, sis, I truly do.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, with a response like that, I am truly humbled. Thank you so much for those words of praise brotha.
    That was really kind of you to say 1poet, thank you for your much appreciated response.
    Awfully nice of you to say gempis, thank you sista poet.
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as if you took apiece out of my soul diary to....



    when i was reading this...




    beautifull piece sis.....

    i feel ya..








    Libertylady:heart:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Libertylady, your sweet words are appreciated.
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop my sister u posed a thing of blinding positive poetry.
     
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