Black Poetry : Takin My Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternal, Oct 22, 2003.

  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So what
    if you think I jumped
    In the bed so quickly with you
    It's only cause I knew what I wanted to do
    With my body
    And it's not like it wasn't protected
    I refuse to be infected
    With your babies at this time
    So calm down all I did was share what was mine.
    I am grown, a woman at best
    You will treat me with respect and no less
    I can't help it if your upbringing made you see otherwise
    But to tell you the truth and not lies
    How much of a whore can I be
    If I brought you so quickly to the bed with me.
    I have been on a drought now my thirst is quenched
    (It's been more than a year, and not a sip since)
    Can you say the same, as your hormones pour
    Within the last 4 seasons you've been with at least four
    (maybe more)
    And with a track record like that, and you started at least ten years ago
    How did you become the leading judge on labeling a ***
    So
    You were saying that you can't trust me
    I did it with you too quick
    But you did it to me. Hypocrites make me sick.
    Go home til you grow up and realize that I have needs
    I am a woman.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you tell him...
    nice flow sister...
    keep preach this...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt dis speaks of womanly love
     
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    This made me smile, girl. Keep throwin it down!
     
  5. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you write. Please don't stop
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel, thank you for supporting my talent!!
    Preciate the love!!
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, thank you for the love shown! BTW, where is the Watcher, and where is my man Bishop??
     
  8. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis, thank you for the compliment. Although I don't respond to everything, believe me when I say I am reading everything you write!!
    E
     
  9. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eternalprince, I love the way you write as well!! Thank you for gracing my page!!
    Eternal(your princess)
     
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    Justify My Love

    Tell 'em darling!
     
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