Black Poetry : Take You There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 6, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let ur thoughts take u to ecstacy and my touch reach the depths of ur soul
    I wanna satisfy you, so let me take control
    Let this pleasure take you away, baby just open your mind
    Just let go, release it all, I wanna sign it to officially make it mine

    Can you see it? Can you feel it?
    Cuz its so real
    Do you believe it? Can you reach it?
    Let ur moans tell me how you feel

    I believe I can take you there with my mind, body, and soul
    I'll kiss right here, right there, lick and tease til' I feel ur body roll
    I can touch you right there to make you shiver
    I've got the touch with the right purpose- to deliver
    Our bodies will intertwine, outertwine, all of the above
    You will never feel nothing more powerful than the making of our love

    Can you see it? Can you feel it?
    Cuz its so real
    Do you believe it? Can you reach it?
    Let ur moans tell me how you feel

    Cuz I believe I can take you there
    You just got to break free.
     
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    oh man! i'm really not going to get know sleep tonight. i,m feelin this love it!
     
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    LOL, ur just reading it, try feelin it so much that u gotta write it. but thanks
     
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    all i can say is dayum 2 everythin u write.......u keep flowin, ill keep readin.....much love :)
     
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    i know what you mean. its like a ball of fire burning a whole through your flesh. you have to release it or you die. believe me i know
     
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    LOL yeah i guess its sumthin like that. And thank you sarcasm4eva, but ive read a lot of other stuff on here that i have nothin on, like rich he is tight.
     
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    yeah! hes tight, but everyone style is so unique and so tight. It adds flava to destees