Black Poetry : Take. This Is My Heart

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Take.
    This is my heart
    Which has been broken FOR you
    It has been fragmented for easy partaking
    Tenderized by long nights of longing & aching
    Seasoned with sharp, pungent herbs of neglect
    Just perfect for disintegrating
    Any muscular resistance~~~Ensuring your triumphant subsistence
    Prepared on a burning-hot pyre of misuse
    And
    Served on a bed of weary exhaustion
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With each 'Break, a lesson must be learned. No one can vigorate your heart as you can, or mend it. Anyone who's not ready/willing/or able to treat your heart as they would their own, ...it's time to, keep it moving ------->
    wonderful, heartfelt piece poet.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful flow Sister cherryblossom

    Only a mean, selfish, heartless cad ( a man who behaves dishonourably ) would continue to break a heart and actually want it served up.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm....

    A Patchwork heap
    Of “never allowed” release
    That doesn’t allow the peace
    A kind and generous soul needs
    To heal
    i feel
    your compartmentalization
    of so many broken heart relations
    has disturbed the simplistic equations
    that determine euphoric and joyful sensations
    but
    there
    is
    a
    healing
    a "misused and broken hearts" sealant
    that allows happiness to thrive once again
    and, love, to be triumphant...in the end

    SHOULD I ADMINISTER THIS ANTEDOTE...that you might love, fully, once again?
     
  5. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whew, Sister Queen, did I ever learn 'em! Many of them, the HARD WAY, but I learned! lol

    Thank you for the luv!
     
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    Thank you much, Hodee!

    And yeah, I agree with you on the "cad."

    Like the piece says it has already been "broken." So, there's no need for any other man to do so. It's already had its share of gashes and stitches and even transfusions.

    So, any man who deems himself a "heartbreaker" is outta luck with me! lol
     
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    Wooo, Bro. Baller! You know just how to break it down!

    And THIS PART was hittin' the nail on the head!

    YOU AINT NEVA LIED!

    Watch out deah, now! :lol:


    Thanx again for the feedback!
     
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    I remember, a brokenheart ain't no joke, we always serve it up, real proper...THE FIRST TIME!
    But we live, learn, move on and love again.

    The next time we tread a little more softly and wisely.

    It's the only way to be sure...love never hurts like that again.

    btw, beautiful artwork>as you can see I love art...lol.

    Excellent piece, Cherryblossom.​



    epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every piece broken is mended by da morrow of the new day this was indeed awesome
    and well felt from da broken heart....big ups sis
     
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