Black Poetry : Take My Hand

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside my handz
    o' give me u
    let these hand
    brand ya body
    let them touch
    ya emotions

    see in these hands
    is warmth & tenderness
    there is love that's
    affectionate

    my handz is real
    they feel not kill
    thay be of hugs
    not to mug
    allow these handz
    to caress
    feel da handz of
    happiness
    let them hold
    wipe away tears
    ease da fears

    These handz be yours
    for many years
    they pose
    compassion like my heart
    they don't bite
    nor do they bark
    these handz will cuddle u
    these handz write
    to many hearts

    If u need a pair
    take these handz
    of a lover man


    :heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a sweet poem about a man's hand. We women get plenty of handz...men's handz :lol: How bout the heart to go wit the handz. Dat way, the handz will hang around a lot longer...hopefully for a life time.

    Ya sista...Joyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da heart!!!! O' kay ........stay tune .
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH-NE$$


    boy! you got me ova here sangin'...

    "i wanna hold your hand..." :D

    this was very sweet-ly done.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice love flow Rich.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let's do math... a zillion poetessess here; your two hands.

    i hope you can handle them all bruh!!

    this is tyte
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    These two handz

    sunshyne ........sing coz these handz can do wonders

    Heartbeat ........man thankz just given my handz

    J'h ........my two handz can handle 3 zillion and a half
    coz i touch ova 50 billion a day!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

    thankz family big tyme.............:D
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh yes, talk about the hands Richness. Love going back through the files finding gems like this.

    BE
     
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    indeed with these handz i offer mindz to give her de gentle
    caresses of tender touchies ...............Thankz BE>>>>>>>>>
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah $R!!!!

    Kewl *** flow bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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