Black Poetry : Take My Hand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 18, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Take my hand
    my dear
    i'll caress away
    ya fears
    my gentle hands
    will wipe away
    ya tears
    just take my hand
    as i tenderly
    kiss ya sadness
    to a whispered smile

    Take my hand
    I'll be de Man
    whom understand
    yo womanly plan
    take my hand
    too a new day
    in a lovers way

    don't be shy
    together we
    can fly my skies

    ya so unsure !
    i'm not here to lure u
    nor bring u drama
    just asking u to be
    my baby momma
    to love me right
    as i u day & night
    come take flyght
    hold my hand

    i'll promise u
    dis and dat
    sweet sugar smacks
    a love so true
    just 4 u
    take my hand
    i'll make that stand
    and be yo man
    in whole not part
    give u my total heart
    feed u wit sweet caress
    hugs & rubs even a
    bubblebath in da tub

    I'll give u honor wit respect
    dis affectional love to
    make u wet & sweat
    take my hand
    as i guide u in da
    direction of compassion
    trust as to be trusted
    be not afraid
    I am real LOVE
    from above upon u
    take grasp and hold on
    ready to rocked u
    til early morn and see
    our new born
    cometh within my sweet
    and allow me my feast
    on ya sugar treat
    as we dance to a erotic beat
    take my hand
    thats it reach
    T
    A
    K
    E MY H
    ..............A
    >>>>>>>>N
    **************D

    JUST WALK UP MY STAIRWAY TO HEAVENLY LOVE & TAKE MY HAND
    :heart: :heart: :kiss: :heart: :heart: :kiss: :heart: :heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    $$RICH$$

    brother, you been to the Babyface school of lyric writing? This needs to be put to a smooth track. tight bro.

    blak
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    offerings from the heart...

    often touches the soul of she whom the offerings are for...as the light goes on, she accepts the hand of his $$RICHNE$$ in flight...and, together, they soar into the sunset.

    let the river flow.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Verb man just asking her to reach out and touch !Thankz
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Baller da offering of hand to love from da heart all so true
    as da RICH one be thanking u bru.......flyght 23 set 4 take off.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    see any woman knows da power of a true hand
    more so then a hand of a man ......coz these handz
    is an eye 2 see and keen ear to hear also da hand
    pack a heart of love to respect & honor ......see these
    hands don't need a washing coz they be blessed.
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    FlyteTyme!!!

    Dawg,

    What's gotten into you???!!!???

    Your vibe is high flying to the MAX mos' def!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    GQ..........man i'm in some kind of funk! or a zone
    under da redeye Eagle or da Hawk of hilltop mountian
    yeap !!!!!!!! Q it's flyte tyme on da 747 get ready coz
    i'll be rumbling a flow of dis kinda show ......Thankz bru.
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 18, 2002
    Messages:
    535
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    Indianapolis
    Ratings:
    +1
    "take my hand" i like the concept of this poem. keep um coming. lovin this board already
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    lonelypoet .......big thankz)) ya at home now so enjoy
    as u flow destee's da place to be as u can see.......
     
Loading...

Users found this page by searching for:

  1. my hand is black how to flow it