Black Poetry : Take my Hand....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord take my hand…..

    Wary I be and lost
    As the cloud covers my soul
    Lord take my hand
    As the thunder takes me
    And the lighting strikes my soul
    Lord please take my hand

    For the storm have wiped me clean
    Leaving me empty and weak
    And my spirit is calling you
    To come heal me
    Rock me like a baby in her cradle
    Touch me and save me
    Lord take my hand

    The winds take me and fold me over
    And I am still standing my ground
    Just need your hand…for
    It seems I can’t hold on any more
    As I walk this lonely road
    My troubles drown me and my pain takes hold
    Please Lord hear me in my prayer
    Take my hand….Oh Lord

    My soul is crying
    And my spirit yearns
    For your touch
    Don’t pass me by
    For I need your hand Lord
    In this storm
    The trees have made a gate
    And my enemies have laid claim
    Left this curse please
    Heal me and take my hand
    For my faith stands firm
    And my love never left
    Lord please
    Oh Lord
    Take my hand
    Walk me through this storm

    Heal me of my grief
    …..of my pain and hurt
    Take me up oh Lord
    Give me a fresh start
    For I been through the harsh wind
    And the storm of pain
    And the river of the lost
    I look to you Lord
    To wash me over
    And heal me
    Lord please
    Oh Lord Please
    Take my hand


    He is the rock, his love is perfect
    for my gift come from him and flows within
    to release......
    (C) 2004
    Poetry Praise​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And so the lord speak ...never have I left you, but put the "spirit" ..in all ...to use as you choose.
    this is an awesome peice, thanks for sharing it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    never unheard he so taketh thee and walk beside thee
    in humble spirit .....love this beautiful prayer and asking of he .
     
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    He is the foundation...
    the source of all completion
    and happiness...

    Take his hand...indeed

    Inspirational read,
    Sage
     
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    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was an amazing poem.
    And the best part is that Im quite sure
    he answered your earnest plea, and
    lead you through that storm.
    Continue to hold on...
    "KEEP EM COMIN"...1
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within in him all things are possible thank you all Rich, Queent, Sage,MzM for the love and support just take his hand.......and only then you can see

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise now if i take ya hand
    can we be GODLY and free
    within his praises & grace
    can we be and fill hope in faith
    something that can't be replaced
    if i take ya hand ...!

    this was so touching and so upspring
    to my eyez left a warm tingle deep inside
    flow on sista Angel i see your wingz floating
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem has truly blessed my soul in ways you will never know...thank you so much.

     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich you sho know how to get me to :blush: dont ya.....

    Sister Joyce thank you for the kind words happy you enjoyed and it helped ya day out

    Peace
    Angel
     
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