Black Poetry : Take me under youre guidance...

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear lord......

    take me under youre guidance....

    i,m longing for the love....
    you have ment for me...
    i just dont know it anymore...
    so i just let things be...


    i dont want to fight things ..
    and dont want to fool myself...

    just bring me to my other half...

    Lord take me under youre wings.....
    i use to have one dream ...
    now i have manny visitors in my dreams.....

    last time one kissed me soft on my shoulder..
    and it made me cry....
    because of the longing for the warmth...



    i,m tired



    i,m longing for someone who loves me for my soul...
    not because he and i doesnt want to be alone...
    i,m longing to hold .
    .i do my prayers and live but the longing stays with me..
    long to say ,come my sweet...
    come sit in my lap....
    calm you down ....
    stroke youre face.....
    now that feels nice huh...
    relax sweety.....
    tommorow everything is going to be alright....
    long to put some nice food on the table...
    and make you run to the pan after you finished and say....
    i,m going for the second round...
    longing for that moment in a loud crowed...
    we doing sumthing stoopid and ..and You say ..."'i saw that"'
    i get you back at home...
    longing for that moment we are somewhere together...
    and i lost you .........
    that moment like everyone has ..that moment you feel alone..
    just by looking together ...we feel ..that being alone on this earth
    though we are together......
    we walk towards eachother and take the hands .....and hug.
    I long to play with you hands ....
    play with you hands ...
    hold youre hand of hard work...
    against my cheek...
    Longing ...to back you up
    get you on track.. ...
    that they know .....
    he has a woman behind him....that is strong...
    o you cant touch them ...that love is real strong....
    pray for you ...
    and hope to be a blessing for you with my Love and support...


    Longing...




    oh lord....


    longing...


    to make love...



    longing in a healthy way...
    for i never could expressed that,,,,,
    my passed relationship he pussed me away.....

    longing to be beautifull to you.......
    dress myself up for you...
    longing to be sexy ....
    only to yo....
    let that part out....
    what i am supposed to do...

    Longing ...

    longing to love you.



    Take me under youre guidance lord.....
    you told me you were going to make my path straight...
    i realy dont know the way.....
    bring me to him ...
    or bring him to me...
    let it be real...
    not vague or mistery...
    clear...
    nor confusion not in him or in me...
    there is no hurry in this....
    no imergancy....
    no bleed...
    just longing for my dear...
    where are you ..
    yes ...
    who are you.....
    streching my arms out for you....
    the call for you weeps..
    the soul sumthimes crys ...
    for i wonder where you ...
    sleep ...
    will you come to me....
    my trust is in He......

    ...



    take me under you wings ...
    dont want to make mistakes...
    like i said i want it to be youre will lord.....
    youre way....

    .....




    (to be continued)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very warm sweet asking to be loved
    i see you Auroraflower cuddling up
    holding hands and having sweet embrace
    this was indearing to the heart.......

    surely he will come upon you with great love
    and comfort to all your needs just keep faith
    and through prayer he will come ......

    very nice love call
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ask and ye shall recieve...
    just be ready when your prayers are answered girl...
    heartfelt piece...

    one love
    khasm
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He will be there for you when you least expect it. This was such a genuinely heartfelt prayer, God can hear you, truly.
     
  5. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Auroraflower, your man is being prepared for you. Since you are such a sweet and loving person, God has to make sure your man deserves you, so he's preparing him just right. He'll come for u soon! Beautiful heartfelt poem
     
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