Black Poetry : Take Me There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 8, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You take me there
    With the touch of your hand
    The rush begins
    The slow, hard rise
    There inside you
    Closed are my eyes

    You take me there
    Love's sweet wetness
    Gathered in your nest
    Sweat from my brow
    Dripping down on your breast

    You take me there
    Up there
    Out there
    Somewhere
    Deep inside a lover's dream
    Take me there
    Where men go to scream

    BE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hellayeah!!!! BE......

    if she take u there where men scream
    then allw me to dream my love's dream
    so i can go there!! man ya came hot and spicy!!:toast:
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scream, huh?

    i smile at the pleasure...
    of making a man scream...

    it is definitely, satisfaction...

    make it plain and simple, poet!

    been there, done it~ ;)
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what you describe is a beautiful thing....

    moving....and yes, MsD....sooo, soooo satisfying....

    yes, BE....

    a