Black Poetry : Take me there

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  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me there
    where sunsets are forever
    and time stands still
    when I look in your eyes
    I see my reflection in stars
    as I lie with you
    admiring the amber view

    Take me there
    where minutes leads to forgotten hours
    only this moment exists
    here cuddled in your arms
    our love is the air we breathe
    as I'm captured in your charm

    Take me there
    where passion is so sweet
    my body warm from fireplace heat
    puts me in the mood to want more
    teasin your lips with grapes
    chilled Cognac Di Amour
    we tip out glass with a toast

    Take me there
    a romantic trip
    a vacation just us two
    on a rose petal carpet
    burning lilac incense
    we discover each other
    on the livingroom floor

    epiphany(c)2001
     
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    I'll take u there

    to a place so sweet
    to share love of u & me
    i'll take u upon my ballroom
    as jazz play in tune
    here we dance in romance
    under candle lite as dinner
    is set right we eat from each
    other hand u my woman & i'm yo man
    I'll take u up high above the sky
    to a place few ever go and wish to be
    i'll take u in compassionly
    i'll walk u ova the roses that line my
    bear rug foor sit u down beside my
    fireplace as i trace ya beauty that sparkle
    in yo eyez as we become mesmerized
    gently i caress ya back leaving a bliss
    of desire u can lone for
    I am the destiny of ya fire
    I'll take u there !:heart: :kiss: :D
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How sweet.........

    Please take me there
    on a magic carpet
    our arms entwine
    in a lover's dance
    we prance in time
    quoting words of rhyme
    of how you'll love me
    and be all mine
    oh take me there
    where the stars shine bright
    where cupid's arrow
    first pierce my heart
    lay me down....... my love
    as you kiss my body
    I'm mesmerized
    with each caress
    this night I'll treasure
    this moment with you
    forever

    epiphany

    with each caress
    :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thanking you for TAKING me there

    feeling the love
    you not a playa
    are you?

    ha ha ha

    DSSNY

    and i ain't mad at cha either
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    epiphany

    one word....

    beautiful

    thank you...

    (my bad....I think that was 3 words!)

    a
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nahhhh Soja......

    No Playa here
    just doin what I favor
    flowing those romantically
    sweet rhymes......
    :kiss:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  7. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Alyce......

    Sometimes its where he takes you
    that brings out the romance in you...

    I appreciate the read....

    much :love:

    Epiphany



    :heart:
     
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    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Full

    of romance, this is....like I likes it!

    whew!

    thank you sis.

    J
     
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    Get ready

    for cupid son
    ready to take u there
    where love flow
    and a romantic show
    of desires to caress ya fire
    take ya steps higher
    on the magic kindom grounds
    where only love can be found
    I'll take u there ....ever so sweet
    just call my name in sets of #3
    and I'll come to thee openly:heart::kiss: :heart: