Black Poetry : Take Me There (hot & muggy repost)

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you take me there
    with the touch of your hand
    the rush begins
    the slow, hard rise
    there inside you
    closed are my eyes

    you take me there
    love's sweet wetness
    gathered in your nest
    sweat from my brow
    dripping down on your breasts

    you take me there
    up there
    out there
    somewhere
    deep inside a lover's dream
    take me there
    where men go to scream

    BE
    (c) 2001
     
  2. Bishop

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    This part is what got me!!!!

    you take me there
    up there
    out there
    somewhere
    deep inside a lover's dream
    take me there
    where men go to scream


    Bruh I know what you mean.....Been there a few times myself!!! WOOOWEEE!!!!
     
  3. misty

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    Don't really know what to on this??
    Maybe... I HOPE I TAKE HIM THERE!!!!!

    Nice Heartbeat
    You're making my day here!!!!

    Misty
     
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    I really wish he would let me take him there.
    Some girls have all the luck! :wink:

    Gaylee
     
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    As usual, she is taking yet another poke in the belly at me, chuckle. Thank you for sharing that wonderful image. It's shared by many, but so few can word it so well. Again, thank you.
     
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    the steamy side of a HeartBeat.:)...taken to the throes of a last breath before love's bless{ing} ROCK my cradle to sleep.:)

    NICE.
     
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