Black Poetry : Take me by the hand Hodee........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me by the hand Hodee
    Do you know my heart is filled with glee
    And I cant believe that you are into me
    I see

    A beautiful friendship evolving
    Everything revolving

    Around us
    Let's discuss

    Some possibilities
    Probably some maybe's

    I look back on my past writes
    And the flo you flowed back with me were out of sight

    I feel a gentle prescence about you
    Could you tell me what it is were suppose to do

    Could we go further than anyone would know
    Could we continue to let the world see our glo
    It aint hard for me to sho

    Love
    Baby, Hodee it comes from above

    Waiting for the right time, waiting for the right guy
    Want to be able to experience love on high
    And dont want it to be about touching my thighs

    With you in time that will come later
    I thank you for not siding with them haters
    Or Players

    And calling this Peach a Jewel
    I can willingly be a fool

    For you
    Be true

    Always for me
    I see

    You again
    My friend

    as you

    Take me by the hand Hodee............
    :smooch: :smooch:

    Thanks Hodee for making my day that was the sweetest thing you done for me. You shown me that you arent afraid to sho what you truly feel.
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    oops...feel like I walked in on something private....sorry...LOL

    great write.


    ya'll just go on.....i'll just back out the door here....
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQn.......Hey Nevar girl, I see you're laying down your love like a tile factory...J/K. Do ya thang girl. Nice tribute:glasses:
     
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    I captured this in quotes, so it will never loose it's essence.


    You said something in another post about being a Southern Woman. My parents are from Memphis. I guess that makes me Southern.


    Possibilities - I gave you the entry and I handed you a key. No one knows what this means but you and me. shhhhh....
     
  5. nevar

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    thanks again to spicy so icy for showing this peach some love. thank ya , thank ya.

    to abstract please honey dont feel as if your not suppose to be here. i want you to enter my world. thanks for the love shown.

    possibilites huh well see how this thing play out. thanks for your continuous love for me. and oh when are we going to be on the same page. i would love to work with you let me know. i think i ask this before but i will never stop asking till I get what i want. and believe im persistent.
    :smooch: :smooch:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh yes i can see it now this was awesome Nevar
    whewwwwww i almost melted
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich for the love that was shown.:ilu:
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nevar.... who needs the nickel now?????????????????????? lmao... flow on sis
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to ifucomesoftly....

    hey im just flowing hey dont nobody want me. you got not one but two hollaring at cha. i aint mad at cha. its summer im going to take your advice and get out. shoot i want be like you minus the nickel. wink, wink:thinking: :thinking:
     
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