Quiet Poetry Lounge : Take Me...Away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PLATINUMILLITY1, May 19, 2008.

  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A new Way
    Better Day
    A New Face
    It's Me

    Take Me away
    I've been Longing to Leave
    Ready in the First Week
    But it's Taken More than 53

    more than one of these
    12 month Parodies
    So Take me
    Away

    Time to Vacate
    Shunned all of me
    So NOW it's Time to Be free
    Live out MY dream

    Meet the Term
    In all hands on
    All trans going
    Port mself into Knowing

    Gain Brain
    Sane out this misfortune
    Opportune from this Pain,
    name gaming

    Name Fame
    What ever it can take
    The test of breaks
    Stay'in Flamed

    Take me away
    Time to execute plan
    Resuce the day
    Of Mothers Hand

    Take me away
    But not for too long
    I have to return
    So we ALL can go on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be taken away, to follow your dreams where ever they may lead, then come back to share what you know. Such a serenity and determination in your flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to move into a venture and then journey back wiser leaves a place untouched
    awesome write feeling you sis.
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank YOU Sister Watzinaname
    Nothing Better than Positive gain to help you to a Bright Future


    and Upon Return, what Wonders To Find, the journey has changed life all together
    Thank You Big Bro
     
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    My sweet sister Plat! You done put it down! I know you have some big things in store for you...some great blessings lie waiting with ONLY your name on it! Go claim it girl!!!!!

    And keep flowing in the process!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    when you get there can you buy me a t-shirt so it looks like i've been there too?

    lol

    listen i'm feeling the essence here the growth

    the spiritualness in this piece

    and the waiting to return

    almost born again

    peace
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Both of yall are too Crazy!!!!!
    Ya Know I love it!!!!!
    DSS I will bring you Back a Fresh tee:rolleyes:
    We can get matching outfits and look like twins!:D

    Sister LovesDestiny You are just Wonderful! LOL
    I'll keep on trying to put my hand down LOL
    Claim the VICTORY!!!!!:congrats:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    matching outfits?

    you mean like the same lol
     
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    Change is always a good thing, and the desire to do so is even better! ..go for the gold sis...^5
     
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    Great flow!
    I really enjoyed reading this.
    Had me thinking about new horizons I need to charter.
     
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