Quiet Poetry Lounge : Take It How You Want It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GuttaOfACreole, Feb 3, 2004.

  1. GuttaOfACreole

    GuttaOfACreole New Member MEMBER

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    As I sit and listen to your sweet voice
    it just bring joyous thoughts into my mind.
    Whether it be talking on the phone or dreaming
    about being in your precence.
    Eventhough it has only been a couple of days
    since we first meet.
    I long for your tender voice and your beautiful
    thoughts
    As they roll across your lips, as you open your mouth.
    As far as I am Concerened you are a beautiful person
    both inside aswell as out.
    And for that i adore you.
    Every inch of it you have to offer.
    As time amongst each of us last,
    I make the best of it.
    As I listen to you I am drown deeper
    and deeper into your mind
    But I cant understand why I tend to want
    to stop everything around me
    and focus on one thing and one person, and
    thats you.
    I know you might say
    "How is that true, you dont even know me!"
    And that would be true.
    But as I ask you this question.
    If you give me that chance to get to know you better,
    then all of this will be true.
    And the end result would be.
    You for Me, and Me for You[
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    feel the vube on it
    flow on
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow i felt dis take it how u wanna woooweeeee!
    flow on i'm into it
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful flow...loved the way you versed it. much love to you.
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    dat so tweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. :D

    This is a very...very...sweet poem.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast: