Black Poetry : Take It How You Want It!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GuttaOfACreole, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. GuttaOfACreole

    GuttaOfACreole New Member MEMBER

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    As I sit and listen to your sweet voice
    it just bring joyous thoughts into my mind.
    Whether it be talking on the phone or dreaming
    about being in your precence.
    Eventhough it has only been a couple of days
    since we first meet.
    I long for your tender voice and your beautiful
    thoughts
    As they roll across your lips, as you open your mouth.
    As far as I am Concerened you are a beautiful person
    both inside aswell as out.
    And for that i adore you.
    Every inch of it you have to offer.
    As time amongst each of us last,
    I make the best of it.
    As I listen to you I am drown deeper
    and deeper into your mind
    But I cant understand why I tend to want
    to stop everything around me
    and focus on one thing and one person, and
    thats you.
    I know you might say
    "How is that true, you dont even know me!"
    And that would be true.
    But as I ask you this question.
    If you give me that chance to get to know you better,
    then all of this will be true.
    And the end result would be.
    You for Me, and Me for You
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic flows
    happy you here to share and sho love
    welcome to the family :D

    maybe u would like this in the poetry forum and not here
    so everyone can feel yo vibe we put spoken words here
    in this forum in a wave file to be heard over our speakers
    so i will move it for you ......again welcome to the family
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This just reminded me of the feeling of meeting someone, and feeling that you're already connected, somehow...very nice piece.
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww......that was so beautiful