Black Poetry : Take from me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 4, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. gempis

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    whoa, my girl, this is soooooo beautiful!!! (and if this person doesn't do all those things, lemme know and I'll smack em) Much love for your scribe, girl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed tyte and asweome
    if he can't i can !
    love the way this was done
    wow !

    let me make that change
    take all this away and replace it wit dis !!
    feeling ya like dat
     
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    MY favorite part...
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    Lifes anxieties are worth a love like this...so beautiful my soul sista.
    There are those who write poetry and there are POETS...you my sista exceed the latter on into the heavens of artistic excellence.

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sister....
    this was
    like woooweee...lol
    tight drop
    flow on i likes this...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wonderful words talking about give and take...deep.
     
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    So beautiful.

    With my chin in my hands I exhale.

    Loved this entirely.
     
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    that quote that triniti took
    says it all...

    i'm not a big lover of love poems...
    as you guys probably already know...
    but you have a way of touching deeper then the surface
    with yours...i can't explain the exact properties...
    but i am always left pondering your wordz sage...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Omigod, this was so beautiful there are no words.
    Poet, you are wonderful!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis…you may need to smack them…then again, maybe not
    I think he knows…lol, Peace & Love Sister



    Rich…if you promise to make that change the way I know
    Your capable… “King of Flyte”…why yes, you could
    Have that honor…get ya keys ready, lol…Thanks Brother!



    Cindy…my mentor often calls me the “Brave Poet”..because
    I dare to say what most would not…for the same reason
    You speak of … “losing yourself”…but I like the feeling
    Of losing myself…especially when I’m able to finally
    Express it in poetry…then suddenly I’m found.
    Thanks so much for your words!



    Triniti…(you my sista exceed the latter on into the heavens of artistic excellence.)
    You and your gift for words…keep me lifted…Truly Sister…allow me
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: