Black Poetry : take away

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i was 10,
    i sipped some wine
    it tasted good so
    i sipped some more
    and more.... and more... and more.....
    though i heard that it was poison
    to my body, it was my only way to wash
    away my pain

    today, i wished to take a
    sip here a gulp there
    for the first tyme in a long tyme
    cause i am SOO SICK of
    unimportant bull**** that
    seems to clutter our everyday
    "lives"
    SPIRIT IGNORANCE den infeked
    our conscince macing(making) us
    ill-literate.

    judgin my clothes
    and what i wear
    "yo hair ****** up"
    well guess what
    "yo soul is ****** up"

    display yo soul to the masses
    is what i heard whispered
    in their ears
    but instead they ran into
    the devils hands

    they were afraid to face
    themselves in the face
    of reality
    afraid to see that there
    is more than *******,
    hoes, sex, cars, and
    "P.I.M.P'in"
    i wanted to sip
    "The Devil's Wine"
    to drown my pain

    pain because we no nothing farther
    than that of the physical

    pain because today i heard
    my teacher says he was going
    to organize a P.I.M.P MEETING*

    pain because we are not free.......:(
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks lovelyone,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flamin hot....lovin this.

    Much luv,
    foxy.........
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks foxy,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done i like dis here
    tyte scribe sis...
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich,
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcomeeeeeeeeeeeee!
     
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    loved the message...j.
     
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