Black Poetry : Take a stroll through my eyes!

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  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take a stroll through my eyes
    where everything I see is not a surprise.
    Where the difference between me and you
    is the ability to capture the things we do.
    In my eyes, there is no night nor a day
    there is no differnce of a "near" or a "far away".
    In my life, colors are useless and unnecessary
    but they are hopeful when seen in the imaginary.
    I have no reason to put a voice with a face
    my ears alone can define anyones grace.
    My world will never reflect around any depictions
    I have no visual recollect of my destinations.
    Some may think I'm distraught by this disadvantage
    Others may assume that I fought just to manage.
    But they fail to understand, that i can see just like they do
    my vision can also expand to the wonderful possibilities too.
    Even though, I may not be able to comprehend a description
    Or, may not be able to realize a distinction.
    I can still create an imagination
    and I can also demonstrate an reaction.
    I can still feel every human emotion
    and I still get asked about my notion.
    I still live every day as if it was my last
    and I can still remember everything about my past.
    And just like you, my heart dances to a beat
    It too experienced the endless pains of mistreat.
    Now with you, you have that option to see
    You can open your eyes and WHOLA, there you'll be.
    But with me, when I do open my eyes
    Everything that I see is not a surprise!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    allow me geegee deep in yo eyez
    let it be a warmth of mesmerize
    set sight through mines as i hypnotize
    let fine a visional maze a beauty of
    blaze through yo eyez i see a deep
    compassion in demonstrated image
    with a reaction of distinction of hope
    this was a beautiful flow no joke ....

    TYTE drop
     
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    The words were so crystal clear, they sparkled. I enjoyed this piece poet.
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
     
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