Black Poetry : Tacet Tablet

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Easy as breezes
    relieving my spirit
    of persistant
    tormenting forces
    ...opening the
    cover I re-align the
    context of vexations~
    transcriptions on
    smooth, white;
    with blue, straight
    ...lines --
    inside this place
    I take irresistable
    comfort-
    thoughts seized in
    the sway of all
    five fingers
    ~arched...
    gently, my right
    hand brushes
    strokes of kallos
    adding an alphabetical
    inscription
    composing the language
    that best expresses
    my emotional
    disposition; while
    arguably debating
    the notion that
    'actions speak
    louder than words'
    Outlining my history
    depends as much on
    the past as my
    today relies on
    futures of tomorrows
    Tacet tablet that hears
    all of the melodic notes
    from my symphony of life
    ...Maintain my journal
    of proses; which
    continue to be
    My Daily Bread


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. 8th wonder

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    i am grateful...
    to this place
    white face
    blue lines
    blood, sweat and tears
    love no doubt

    i am grateful..
    you add
    much curve
    to the mind musiq
    in the room

    i am grateful..
    for you...

    8th!
     
  3. dnommo

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    ***stepping in under the cover of serene***

    hmmm, this place seems familiar... ahhh it's because this is the home of n2...the scribes are so peaceful and wonderful...i think i shall pick this one up and carry it home with me...

    thanks for the read...

    ***leaving under the cover of silence***
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th ~

    Hey sistah, thank you for coming into
    my sanctuary and for reading ME!!
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo ~

    ....take me where ever you'd like, Mr. Romance...!!

    Thank you for reading Me!!
     
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    A Familiar spot

    Have been there before and I enjoy it to know that others visit it and enjoy it as much as I--Amun-Ra

    here's one for you to chew on by Amun-Ra

    come to the Forums and comment on Who's Fooling Whom? (Does Religion Work?)

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php3?threadid=1366
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra

    Thank you for reading ME!!
     
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    there is

    as much intrinsic pleasure in the very act of writing, as we get from the finished work itself.

    You captivate my mental, as you always do when I read the written treasures from your mind.

    peace,

    alyce
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From one deep sista ....

    to another....Alyce, I thank you for responding
    to this piece, it does speak fluently about some
    of what is going on internally in my "upper room"!!

    Glad you could enjoy!!
     
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    Daily Bread

    Reminds me and keeps me drifting...motionless,into a place,far far away,trully pleasent,SOME WHERE OVER THE RAINBOW,lovely,
    Desert Storm
     
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