Black Poetry : TABU ROAD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Road walk into none existence
    life pose no return trying harder
    to survive in the false dreams
    clinging onto the unknown as a
    journeyman i am, i venture back
    down Tabu roadz in this big sore
    place of realism bounded in burden
    to conquer my struggle, find my love
    foresee loyality i define in rapture
    crossing from three generations of
    proverty passing tame seductional
    I rise from the clay of dust & water
    on stand the bridge of love i walked
    to the left lay testaments and to my
    right anxious churns , i realized space
    of tyme the deception holds in this
    sap intimate moment i fight off my prey
    Tabu taken hold passion looms thy heart
    my struggle city streets cry da blood
    my love vent into temporary desires
    cast a confusing deed to my exists lay
    at the helm of pleasure i see ahead pass
    Tabu to ransom love this winding road drifts
    and drifts apart i hear the solitary music
    disguising songs my lyrical completion is now
    de-nounce'd stain of tomorrow become pain
    Tabu a part of u lay me yet my heart defeat
    shadow songs revealed love manifest to reside
    beneath your brown eyes, strength become my
    power the struggle dems and new light shine
    brisking my today, enfold depth enraptured love
    i rise above failure in my endless walk brave as
    King of Kingz unconditionally , tabu road no more
    I lay my pen down , as if it was my sword.

    A Dyamondluv confusion
    Nu~wave~Ink Creation
    Reserved 2005 $R
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you're still puttin down the floe's. Another gr8 read my Brother
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, I love reading your flows, you definately have a gift. Big ups Brother.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I read this I thought of a journey of a thousand miles, and within that journey, so many choices on which route to take. Not every turn is wrong, but some will make the route that much harder to follow. I was into this poet. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u Nita Maeeeeee happy to read ya words thank u my sista

    Big thankz defiantson as i grow you will grow as u glow i will glow
    as we teach each other poeticly your gift is as bright i see happy
    u like .

    thankz watz it can twist and take paths to unknowns and indeed
    make the way back or to the otherside harder but under faith and
    wisdomize mind of knowledge the journey will be sweet without tabu.
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good job man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups Froggy1 Thankz a lot for the visit bruh !
     
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    This was beautiful. That's about all I can say about this one.
     
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    big thankz sis ..................
     
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    wow this took me in fast i enjoyed this read and i love you gift
    thank you for sharing your inner thoughts....Peace Angel
     
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