Black Poetry : Taboo

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desa'rae, Feb 20, 2002.

  1. Desa'rae

    Desa'rae Member MEMBER

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    Taboo

    It was wrong, I know
    the loneliness was too much
    the time we spent apart
    was to far in between

    I didn't see it coming
    the attraction was intense
    something that he shared
    with me was different
    somehow unique

    he told me I was beautiful
    he told me he understands
    he told me what a fool you were
    a selfish, thoughtless man

    he said I should be cherished
    like a precious gem stone
    I fell completely for this man
    though I knew it was taboo

    He wipe my tears and pain away
    the moment we first touched
    its hard for me to deny it
    I'm feeling something real

    I can't go back to what we had
    cause what I have now

    I need

    desi1999-copywritten
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woooweee..I'm loving this vibe here!!! Bring some mo' please....
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desa'rae

    Tyte piece. Scribe On Poetess!

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo girl
    i know whatchu talkin bout. First of all, this is my first
    time reading you and i must say you have wonderful
    talent. Keep it up! Look forward to reading more!
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now.....ok....

    full of meaning...

    and I just wanna thank ya!

    a
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah...

    Great flow Ms Desa'rae!!!

    Welcome!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh huh...

    I have no wordz for this hea... but it aint cause I dont feel it! I like ya style!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u can talk to me any time coz dis scribe u vibing is tyght
    lovin yo style .......mo mo mo !!!!!!!!!
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desa'rae, Desa'rae, Desa'rae,

    This came from yo "tight" box didn't it. I enjoyed reading every line. It reminds me of someone. Welcome to the forum.

    Ya sista in poetry...Joyce :)
     
  10. blackfox

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    Something about how you write sister Desa'rae Tight Taboo
     
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