Black Poetry : Taboo Pt.1 (She)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Aug 20, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was beautiful...
    so much so it made me want to write
    her name on my belly with moans
    and cries and groans

    that would be released into the night air
    i wanted to capture her on paper...
    From her soul to her hips
    I wanted to freeze frame that moment and
    dniwer (rewind)
    out taboo conquests that would leave
    me a panting mess on satin sheets not ment
    to hold THIS kind of lovemaking...

    No...
    This kind was forbidden, despised, and Mz.Understood...
    (they say a women isn't meant to love a women)
    but i was drawn to her flesh...

    I know i was'nt suppose to do it but still
    she would seduce me quietly leading me to various levels
    of a forbidden paradise...

    What the Hell was i becoming?
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    Hello fambly,
    I know i havent been in the forum lately, and i am VERY rusty when it comes to poetry, havent written in a while. I hope u like this peice,...Pt.2 is coming soon...

    :heart:
    -story

    (p.s.s i'm not TOTALLY back yet just got alittle home sick, LOL, i'll be on every once and a while, i miss you all, and i'll see you soon.)
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    awaiting pt. 2

    jh.
     
  3. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow, im very impressed
    keep the flow going
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice can't wait for pt.2
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice reading you again. Telling a tale of not being comfortable with one's preference. I liked the flow so far. Awaiting part 2.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: hey nice reading you again....very nice read awaiting pt 2
     
  7. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No rust there. Looking forward to Part II :wave:
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeh this is nice but let me drop a little something up in here

    Make marks on fake hearts with ink pens and stink blends
    Yall better think then, have bad hair day with kinked trends
    aim at targets lay lame on carpets with shots from my glock
    do needlework on feeble jerks got a spool of thread you shocked?
    School this head on Hip Hop fool misled and can’t rip shop
    In my complex Lex cruise great but use brakes to slow or stop
    My car, drop top bazaar apply oils try spoils the squeaks doe
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's what I'm talkin' about.....I enjoyed it.......nice readin' my lil' sistah again......You go gurl!!!!!!! :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to see you back on the board sis!

    that first stanza...mm mm mm

    that is some feeling...maaan...

    Girl...did I mention how nice it is to have you back on the board again... :sand:

    Love your flow girl! Love your flow!
     
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