Black Poetry : Synthesis

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LyrikalShe, Jan 17, 2004.

  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i stood at the crossroads
    watching in disbelief
    as i let part of myself wander
    down the path i chose not to take
    i was kissed goodbye
    and wished well
    as he went to see
    if the grass was truly greener
    on the other side

    today
    i take that wayward part of me
    back into myself...
    and am made whole


    c. 2003 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop love how it was done
     
  3. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was vivid and beautiful.nice work.

    Roni
     
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    Sometimes we just have to piece ourselves back together and get on with it....very nice.
     
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    Release & be...

    Very nice.
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon LyrikalShe


    nice of you to visit DESTEE and post a new piece...


    WOW!! WOW!! i guess letting go is the best option, as you have become a NEW person... a nubian flower that just bloomed...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///