Black Poetry : synonyms of diggin' him (the conscious version)

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  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    two hundred seventy plus
    days down & counting…
    still… i’m diggin’ you like—

    an old soul record that
    stays in maximum rotation
    on every radio station
    across the nation…
    causing those who hear it
    to reminisce & say **** like:
    “oooo… that’s MY song!!”
    …as they wave their hands
    & hum along to timeless lyrics
    that make them secretly wish
    they could write love poems…

    those passionate confessions
    whispered during intense
    politicking sessions…
    no longer leave me
    questioning whether your
    actions are as spectacular
    as your words—
    i am a devout believer…
    & you are my new religion
    …ever since you began
    laying hands &
    continuously baptizing me
    in your unique brand
    of revolutionary-blunted
    black-on-black love… undiluted

    now i…
    got you all up in my peace
    & still… i’m diggin’ you
    …opening even wider
    as you incessantly
    french kiss me… deep
    with the euphoric flavor of
    Always on the tip of your tongue
    …intentionally leaving the
    sweetest trace of Exclusivity
    on my mouth… so that…
    when i lick my lips
    (even nine months later)
    …all i taste is Forever & you.


    ©SunShyneOrygynals 2003, all rights reserved.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this! Very nice flow elayne.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know i'm lovin it

    where in the world you been?

    i've missed u
     
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    it brightened my day to come and see your name here...

    as usual you write about love as if you wrote the book or at the very least co-authored it....this peace is no different to all the others....simply beautiful...

    K
     
  5. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...alwaysthanks beautiful poets!!
     
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    queen elayne,

    this piece is (lets use a played out phrase), THE BOMB!!! this piece mused me quite some time ago and i missed the vibe but after reading it again and again and...i'm on a mission thank you for YOUR genius.

    VERB
     
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    You are the wooooooooooman!

    **** y'all got me thinking Black love posters and black lights and Chilites and Boones farm and doobies on Friday nights when love was young and vigorous and all knowing and still seeking itself...this is ABSOLUTE-LY...ELAYN-ICIOUS!:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: Cause the Queen is in the house!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful
    simply woderfully written
    makes me wounder how it must feel to have
    someone love me the way you love your man
    and then put it down into words that simply capture
    the radience of love and being in love
     
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    alwaysthanks you guys!!
    your responses are appreciated... Muchly!
     
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    nooo... thank You, pantha! :)
    'preciate you takin' the time.
     
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