Black Poetry : Synchronized Hips

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Jun 11, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    loving you from the tips
    of your fingers caressing
    you from your neck to your lips
    keeping you in the crest blessed sanctity
    surrounding these beloved hips

    making you want to flip
    taking a sip of this devine wine and dip

    loving you from your fingertips
    caressing your neck and lips keeping you
    in the crest blessed sanctity surrounding
    these lovely hips

    wonder what makes you really trip upon
    the silent tip

    keeping me from loving you,
    your neck, your lips, your fingertips pleasing you
    in the crest blessed sanctity surrounding
    these voluptuous hips

    no need to relinquish the fantasy and unzip
    simply open up your mind and let her rip

    expanding upon the horizon loving these
    synchronized hips






    lana1287 productions copyrighted
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeap! u done took me their !!!
    i done flip to ya script
    making me wanna dip & sip
    da fine wine that's so devine
    am i blind
    NO !!
    just fliped ova dem hips
    ready to lip 2 lip
    a sweet sip ..................u took me their .!
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, very special
    Flow on
    Keep scribin!
    Desert Storm
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx for replying Richy Rich

    glad you enjoyed the read :D

    pd
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx Desert Storm

    i think that i may make a couple of changes here and there

    ~aspirining perfection :lol:

    pd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    *repost by request*

    pd
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this one poetic...i was definitely feeling it.
     
  8. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The name poeticdelight does not do you justice-
    A few suggestions (Don't take any of this seriously)
    Juicy Hussie-
    Delightfully Licky-
    Ok, ok- ya done did it again, ya left me staring at the screen like an IDIOT! over this. Smoking!
     
  9. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see, I don't need no encouragement....

    this is ....

    like I like it

    write that ****, girl!!! :heart:

    Shade
     
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