Black Poetry : "symmetry." (by twofish and j'hiah)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l'm willing to listen to your heart
    and feast my senses on its table
    which has been set...
    even when our perpendicular currents have met
    don't forget
    l love you
    l need you particularly...



    Systematically l breathe you
    in and out...
    like the flows of a gentle river
    when in doubt
    memories of sweeter things remember
    like that time
    you whispered oh so softly
    enchanting rhymes
    that eased my aching mind....



    b/c you're my serenity...
    my garden to tend and keep
    l wont forget the day when l heard you say
    "my love is here to stay"
    for the first time
    l fell asleep
    with eyes wide open..
    as we lay



    you being a smile to my eyes
    recalling those days
    your subtle ways
    of saying all there was to say
    in a glance, caressing
    by chance, reflecting
    as we waltzed through rose blossoms
    l bathed you with petals from top to bottom



    yes, that day l was cleansed
    rinsed by your altruism
    l sprout from your wisdom seeds
    to new beginnings...
    you have raptured me to heaven on earth
    our day is seven
    we're parallel like the number eleven and the equal sign
    you are mine as we entwine



    infinite like an eight
    sun and moon create
    perfect balance like the planets
    constantly flowing is a challenge
    yet you always
    seem
    to move me..
    wherever your breeze shifts
    l will exist
    whatever your life holds
    l will expose
    whenever we find ourselves in need
    we will succeed

    just you and me.....
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) j'hiah - many thanks - that was lovely wasn't it? :)

    the deepest part is that the title 'symmetry' came into my head as well - telepathy no less - truly fascinating

    1luv
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    Tight Collaboration

    you two have tight skills

    :D i bet i know who wrote what

    j'hiah in blue and 2fish in purple :)

    again, i could be wrong :lol:

    cheers :toast:

    pd
     
  4. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2fish. & hugedome.


    this is wonderful you two!! had me sighin' &
    awwwwin' at the end & everything!! :D
    thank you for sharin' your collaborative flow!
    the page has tru-ly been blessed.

    itsallLove, chirens.

    elayne.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twofish you're tyte girrrlll...
    just honored to be the first one to make "symmetry" collab style..
    :D your "virginity" was lost = (found) in all care and l was the first :toast: (yeahhh l'm braggin')

    pdelight,
    thanx donness. actually the purple is mine.. :jawdrop: just playin'.

    elayne,
    yo l got your huge dome :D wait til' l see you girrllll...
    thanx babygirl you know it's nfinite.......
     
  6. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many thanks ya'll...yes j'hiah took my collabo virginity and it was SOOOO GOOOOOD!!!!! :) J'hiah - I know you don't plan on bein a 1 nite stand, right?

    Love and Blessings
    2fish
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    roflmao

    pd
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo i can't front this was a phat collab

    peace poets

    4real something to be proud of


    DSS
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2fish, l can stand you many nights :lips: :D

    So'ja,
    thanx peep....

    nfinite.
     
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    LMAO J'hiah!

    thanks So'ja and everyone!!!
     
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