Black Poetry : swirling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherdarrows@, Apr 18, 2007.

  1. brotherdarrows@

    brotherdarrows@ Member MEMBER

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    admist me all the happenings swirling around me and the changes that i better me ready to be and change with what i see for security or die you see because i did not see and the things that be beyond my control you see and serenity a possibilty of things to be with you i and me with us going in and out and free of anything that we had want and need watch out for greed and creed freed never devil forever watchout better moving in admist me all the happening that happen rapping and clapping and flapping my brain when i brain my mind and mine my brain when i make it plain all that is happening im my midst around me swirling.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great write...............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed your word play poet. Keep those flows coming.