Black Poetry : Swiggin'

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take a swig. :drink:
    Let my cool wetness glide through your lips & into your system.
    I'll give U courage beyond your wildest dreams.
    I'll make u believe it's impossible 4 U 2 experience defeat.
    Make your speech slurred, but you'll still speak 2 girls,
    Cuz U know you're irresistable:cool: & they all wanna sample the dish I've prepared.
    Compared 2 the way U were prior 2 meeting me,
    Shiiit...You're in desperate need of me.
    How else can U lose all inhibition & be a fool 2 your intuition?
    U wanna have that "fvck it" attitude?:censored:
    Take a swig...:drink:

    Feel the way i take away your breath?
    My intense harshness'll put hair on your chest.
    And make U less inclined 2 listen 2 your mind
    when situations arise that require time 2 decide what
    plan of action should be designed. :bam:
    Got a dimepiece ready 2 be tapped, but no Jimmy hat?
    Don't worry about it dog, I got your back.
    U can't get afflicted with me powering your stick, kid.
    And I'll make U forget that it's possible U can get her pregnant.:baby:
    And when you're in it, U won't pay attention 2 how U don't find her attractive.
    You'll just be happy that you're being sexually active.
    Take a swig...:drink:

    Embrace the buzz as U stagger & sway.
    U had a bad day so now it's time 2 escape.
    Break away from the mundane & let your body & mind seperate...
    Become detached from reality as I affect your ability 2 think straight.
    And whoever's in your presence is amazed at
    how fast I can make your anger elevate.:hulk:
    Make u act in ways U wouldn't act if U didn't enjoy the drink.
    Like falling in the streets or resting your head on toilet seats
    cuz the fire water's got U burning up.
    Hurling chunks of food & guts.:puke:
    Dry heaving from the depths of your nuts...
    Vowing that it's gonna be the last time U drink like that.
    Yeah...
    Alright...
    U know how 2 get over a hangover?
    Take a swig...:drink:

    No prohibition, so U can partake of the spirits as much as U like.
    But it behooves U 2 take into consideration your body's weight & height.
    Cuz U can only safely handle a proportionate amount. :danger:
    You'll know you're in the red when U forget how 2 count.
    Or U know U can't walk but U think U can drive. :car:
    When getting where U wanna be is more important than preserving your life.
    Take a swig...:drink:
    U remember an incident in your past that gives U an uncontrollable urge 2 cry. :cry:
    Swig!:drink:
    4 some strange reason, U feel inclined 2 profess your love 4 & hug a guy... :couple:
    Swig!:drink:
    And kiss him on the cheek... :smooch:
    Swig! :drink:
    Then fall out your seat... :injured:
    Swig!!!:drink:
    But none of that happens with weed.
    Take a hit.:yo:


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pass it on ova here dis was tyte
     
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    :hearthis: this was off the hook enjoyed it.....
     
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    Yes, that demon rum. A swig makes you feel like you can do anything and everything, but unfortunately most of those things aren't favorable. Liked the way this draws the reader in to this topic. Tight drop.
     
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    ...whew...I took a swig of these words
    and I'm smitten...
    I cannot convey how refreshing it is
    to have you back on the front page...

    Great message u conveyed in this peace...
    it's funny how the evil of the strong drink
    is the elimination of reasoning...and the
    outcome is often regret...infinite

    ....thorough work here poet
    Oneluv,
    Sage
     
  6. PositiveMindset

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    Brother $$, pass the dutchie pon the left hand side.

    mzblk, thanks 4 the feel, sister.

    Sister watz, just think, it causes so much trouble, but it's legal.Hmmm.

    Sister angelic, had some serious memories while composing this. Let's just say it's a pseudo-autobiography. Thank U 4 the read\feel.